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          [BLAH BLAH. PART ONE OF THIS STORY. I'M SORRY IT'S SO TERRIBLE. IT'S MY FIRST EVER CHARACTER X READER. JUST TRY TO BEAR WITH ME HERE.]

It was like any other normal day in the hot, humid city you lived in. You were laying in your bed until your alarm decided to go off. You had a dream. Not a nightmare, but a strange dream. You sat up slowly, gently rubbing one of your [E/C] eyes. You did not feel like waking up, you never slept more then a few hours. You sighed, slowly shuffling out of bed. You walked over to your closet, pulling it open to reveal your many different outfits and such. You pulled out your favorite [F/C] colored shirt and a your favorite pair of pants.
You then continued to get dressed. You pulled on a hoodie, brushed your [H/L] [H/C] hair and went to your kitchen to eat.

  You lived alone in the city. You owned your own apartment... Well, not exactly. Your mom was never around. You were only the age of 15. You were in your junior year of Highschool.
As you were eating, you realized you had to leave in 3 minutes to be on time for the bus stop. You groaned and mumbled. "Fuck.." You quickly pulled on your favorite hoodie and pair of shoes.
You ran outside, almost missing the bus. You ride the bus every morning for about an hour, which is why you wake up so early.


*********************TIME SKIP BECAUSE I AM CURRENTLY TIRED AS FUCK**********************


     As you arrived at the school, you let your [H/L] [H/C] bangs fall into your face. You were quiet but, you did enjoy talking to people. If they talked to you first, of course. You sat down in your usual seat near the back of the classroom. Your first class was Literature. You loved it for some reason. You pulled out your books and started to continue an assignment you were suppose to be working on. Until, the noise of the classroom door opening caught your attention. You peered up through your bangs at the door. You quickly felt your heart race as you lifted your head slowly, gazing at the boy that just entered. His name was Dave Strider. You had a crush on the 'Cool Kid' of the school. Not even the teachers messed with him... As you gazed you felt your cheeks turn a light pink as he started to walk, heading for his usual spot. 'Oh god, I need to stop or he'll see me...' You thought to yourself as you focused you [E/C] eyes back to your paper.

  About halfway through the class you couldn't help but to finally take a small look at your crush again. You slowly focused your gaze on the boy. He wasn't paying attention at all. It looked like he was doodling. 'So cool... And so.. Cute.' You accidently let out a small, happy squeak type of sigh. He tilted his head over and peeked at you. You froze and felt your face starting to heat up. 'Oh god. Oh god!' You thought to yourself, quickly turning your head away. You didn't even realize he stood up and moved to the desk next to you. You just felt your heart race like a drum as you felt his gaze through his sunglasses. You just knew he was looking at you and wondering. Wondering why the hell you were looking at him. 'Oh god dammit!' You bit your lip as he went and poked your shoulder. You flinched at the poke and looked at him.
  
    He was looking at you with his usual cool guy look. "Hey, are you okay..?" He said in his amazing cute voice that you almost melted at. You never thought the boy you had a crush on. The cool kid! Would ever, EVER talk to you. You blushed hard now, making it extremely noticeable. "Um.. Yeah.." You softly replied back, almost shuddering your words as you tried to focus your gaze on something. Anything other then your crush. You still were trying to take in what had just happened as he gave a small concerned look, which was rare for him and he replied "You sure, dude? I mean, your face is all flushed. Maybe you should go to the nurse.." You blinked at what he said and tried to calm your blush down. "N-no! Really.. I'm fine." You studdered your words and he leaned his head on his hand. "Alright, if you say so..." He looked away for a moment and you stared down at your paper. He then quickly blurted out another question, "So, why were you starring at me?" His voice sounded serious and you started to freak out in your head. 'He thinks I'm weird. He so does. Shit!' You bit your lip and replied without moving your head at all. "I-.. I uh.. Don't know. I was just kinda, spaced out.." You sighed a sigh of relief at how much better that came out then you thought it would. He interrupted that sigh and peeked out from the top of his sunglasses. "Why did you make that weird little squeak noise..? I heard it, y'know.." He smiled softly, smirking a bit as you left your mouth slightly open. You blushed hard, not really knowing what to say but, as you were going to make up some stupid lie, the bell rung and you quickly gathered up your things, fixing your [F/C] colored hoodie before walking quickly out the door.

You lasted the rest of the day, passing Dave in the hall a few times. He looked at you and you felt it. You tried to ignore it. It was so hard. You got so distracted in every class just thinking about him talking to you.. In his cool, cute, amazing voice.. He was sexy to you and you hated how weird you were. You shook your head and finally, after the last period ended you gathered your stuff from your locker and started to head out the doors. As soon as you stepped out the doors Dave was standing right there, almost like he was waiting just for you. He stepped up from where he was leaning on a wall and stepped in front of you. "Sup. Is it alright if I walk you home?" His sunglasses let out a sparkle and you felt your cheeks heat up. But, you smiled a small smile and nodded. "Sure, I guess.." You were blushing and you knew it. "Your face is all red again.." He turned and looked at you as you started to walk. "You should rest when you get home.." He looked back to where he was walking and you nodded. [[THIS IS WHERE I'M ENDING. I'M SORRY, I'M TIREDDDDD. I'LL WRITE PART 2 TOMORROW OR MAYBE, IF I AM STILL AWAKE AND FEEL LIKE DOING SHIT... I'LL DO IT LATER. YEAH, SORRY IT'S REALLY SHITTY AND KINDA LONG..]]
YES, DIRK ISN'T IN THIS PART YET.
I'M SORRY.
THIS IS SO LONG AND SO BAD AND RANDOM. ;-;
IT'S MY FIRST ONE.
BUT.. I MEAN, I GUESS IT'S NOT BAD FOR MY FIRST.

BY THE WAY, THERE IS A LEMON COMING UP IN THIS STORY.
MOST LIKELY IN PART 2.

I WILL ONLY CONTINUE IF PEOPLE COMMENT AND WANT ME TO, SAYING IT'S GOOD AND STUFF..
I NEED MOTIVATION.
OTHERWISE, THIS STORY WILL JUST GO POOP.

Yeah, thanks for reading! Report any grammar, punctuation errors or anything else! I will take suggestions of who I should write about next.
If I know the character.
ANYWAYS....
YEAH. HERE YOU GO.

Obviously Andrew Hussie owns Dave and Dirk.

And then you, well.. You own you!
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CuteGirl03 Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
Please make part 2
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KanayaMaryam0413 Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
moooooooaaaaaaaaaarrrr :iconpervydaveplz:
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ferriluver101 Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2015
WAFFLES THIS ISH SOFLUFFYYYYYYYYYYYYY
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Sophia356 Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2015
When ever I read a new story I always find your account in the comments, promise I'm not a stalker. You have a good taste in stories X3 Emote :eeeee: 
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ferriluver101 Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2015
Haha... Yeah



Tooootally

Crazay no? I always read DAVE x reader or John x reader ode dirk x reader or Jake x reader and everyone else who are guys
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WafflesRGewd27 Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
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CrispySparklez Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2014
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TheFrenchiestOfFries Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
It's so cute~! ^^
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Iluvkarkitty Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2014
O////O... fuck dave I like karkat
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8IRDS Featured By Owner May 26, 2014  Student Artist
(#^_^#) blush ... I LOVE IT <3
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A-rosie-from-the-sea Featured By Owner May 26, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Please continue ( T_T)\(^-^ ) it's really great!!!!! Wait.... AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Jennnakahonk Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2014
MORE MORE COME ON!!!!!!!!!
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NirvanaRivera Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
OuO this is cute! I like this alot.
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AnitaSays335 Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2014
Really good and freaking awesome! Write moar plz!
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8itch-of-a-spider Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
THIS IS 8EAUTIFUL
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arynholoway Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2014  Student General Artist
Do something with jake x reader
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sbrdragonfly Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2014
Oh my GOD, i...iwanthimsobadohmygodhelpme

By the way: you write beautifully
I've seen many fanfics and this was really good for being tired
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bulletproofBullet Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Please continue!! Its amazing
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ita-chan4ever Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Continue? Plz? :iconmewantplz: Me want
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haipa-inu Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2013   General Artist
please continue
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sollux-lover001 Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2013

You should never let yourself down like that.

 

     I LOVED THIS SO MUCH YOU ARE AN AMAZING WRITER!!!!! :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D ((is it just me or are all the writers tired when they write?))

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notsteveorbill Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2013
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notsteveorbill Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2013
OH....  You did write more....  Yay!
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BunnyUtonium Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2013  Student General Artist
pleas continue its good
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JeffreyTheUnicorn Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
i'm sorry i really don't get on here enough to continue it lol
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DancingKatana Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2013
-Whispers- Please continue I don't want the story to go poop
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JeffreyTheUnicorn Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
-whispers back- i'm sorry i'm not continuing it
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blackoutRenegade Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2013  Student Writer
-whispers- you is a meanie.
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JeffreyTheUnicorn Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
i'm sorry i just don't get on here enough to continue it
-whispers- 
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IsoldeCallisto Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconsuggestivedaveplz: :iconsuggestivedirkplz:
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JeffreyTheUnicorn Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
obby
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hnh2448 Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2013  Student Interface Designer
that is not terriblethat was amazing
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Hetalia24774 Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2013
An you send dem tooooo meee?
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JeffreyTheUnicorn Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Just look through my galleryyyy pleaseeeeee.
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Hetalia24774 Featured By Owner May 26, 2013
Part 2 :в рlease xD
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JeffreyTheUnicorn Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
I have parts 1-4 or something, ehehhe.
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Lucia-Lileth-Vladmir Featured By Owner May 8, 2013  Student Writer
This is interesting... I DON'T LIKE PANTSSSS
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AskCheshireCat1 Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2013
Hmm well actually its up to Dave who owns me hehe im pretty sure its him. XD
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preussensunflowers Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Suggestions for another story? Maybe like a Gamzee x reader or something...but like fluffy cause fluff is full of MiRaCuLoUs AwEsOmEsAuCe XD

Great job so far btw!
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JeffreyTheUnicorn Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Eehehehehehehe you see I don't write much ebcause I sucka t it and i'mw ayyy to lazy yeha psdhfdhfbjngh
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Neon-Apoctiliptic Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
This is facking amazing : D
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JeffreyTheUnicorn Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
ahahahhahasurewhateveryousay
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maidenoftheredrose Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2013
that was so kawaii desu i squilled!
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karkat456 Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2013
Castles? Ok I have an idea, you make her love dave and they fuck,
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JeffreyTheUnicorn Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Thank you that's the best information and motivation I have ever received.
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karkat456 Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2013
you are very welcome. :-)
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PWPaddict Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2013
Definitely continue! :3
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JeffreyTheUnicorn Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
I MIGHT!
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Ira-kago Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Niiiiiiice :3
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